the horizon is locked in at 45 degrees. I’d play with rotating just a bit to open up the composition to a less predictable composition. I think it will breathe more then, too.
In my mind, one of the issues of composition is using a variety of scale. The space between things shouldn’t all be the same.
Also, why is the text all in the exact middle? I like the asymmetry of the arc, the piece left implied. But again, what if this were all nudged to a less predictable spot?
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the horizon is locked in at 45 degrees. I’d play with rotating just a bit to open up the composition to a less predictable composition. I think it will breathe more then, too.
In my mind, one of the issues of composition is using a variety of scale. The space between things shouldn’t all be the same.
Also, why is the text all in the exact middle? I like the asymmetry of the arc, the piece left implied. But again, what if this were all nudged to a less predictable spot?
I like how industrious you are.